In some countries, students can take a 12-month break from education to either earn money or go globe-trotting. What are the pros and cons of this option?
Parents fulfill each and every need of their child. They provide money to child whenever he required. On other hand earning money working for eight hours made importance of money to child. I partially agree with given statement in some countries student can take a 12-month break from education to either earn money or go globe-trotting.
In given statement, there are two different experiences which student can choose. First one which taking break for 12-month and earning money, it always leads beneficial student. In such way that, he experience working hours, what are issues to be face while working in organization. Mainly, he observe the technology, need of organization it may helpful him in choosing career option. while earning money he know whether to spend money or not.
Secondly, if he take 12 month break to go globe-trotting he enjoy most ample time of his life. He may travel through different cities, understood their culture. he may also visited historical places which is also helpful for him to collect historical data. It's also helpful to him in future even though he shifted to any different city, he may not face any trouble because of availability of information.
In considering cons, earning money restricted student to continue further education. He earn money support his family. While 12 month means one year of experience can further attracted him to switch different organization with sound packages. It totally distracted him from him education and move him towards job.
In considering globe-trotting, it's require money which parents has spends. Spending 12 month on globe trotting it's look to be wastage time as well as money. Rather their different social media available which have lots of wikipedia, with an images. One need to think while spending money on globe-trotting or use social media for earing knowledge.
In conclusion, there are always prons and cons in any situation. While taking decision it's plays major role of parents, whether they support or explain their child prons and cons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...ally agree with given statement in some countries student can take a 12-month break from ...
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Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...eneficial student. In such way that, he experience working hours, what are issues to be fa...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'observes'.
Suggestion: observes
...ile working in organization. Mainly, he observe the technology, need of organization it...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...nization it may helpful him in choosing career option. while earning money he know whe...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... helpful him in choosing career option. while earning money he know whether to spend ...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...g career option. while earning money he know whether to spend money or not. Secon...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
... spend money or not. Secondly, if he take 12 month break to go globe-trotting he ...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
... 12 month break to go globe-trotting he enjoy most ample time of his life. He may tra...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...erent cities, understood their culture. he may also visited historical places whic...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'earns'.
Suggestion: earns
...udent to continue further education. He earn money support his family. While 12 mont...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion. He earn money support his family. While 12 month means one year of experience c...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...earn money support his family. While 12 month means one year of experience can furthe...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...eans one year of experience can further attracted him to switch different organization wi...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...y which parents has spends. Spending 12 month on globe trotting its look to be wastag...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...ok to be wastage time as well as money. Rather their different social media available ...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an image' or simply 'images'?
Suggestion: an image; images
...able which have lots of wikipedia, with an images. One need to think while spending money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19335347432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75711168181 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1381952873 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.7391304348 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3913043478 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336218978787 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981783574243 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120383677086 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171028248786 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102865858624 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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