In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy.
What are the causes?
What can be done to address this situation?
In some countries, many people assert that young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less cheerful. It is believed that this problem is attributed to some reasons and I think it should be tackled by a number of viable solutions.
There are two compelling reasons that make the youth to be richer, healthier but less happy nowadays. First, although working hard, working more than necessary give people promotions and money, they can not happy if they do not relax which makes them can enjoy the fruit of their work hard. An obvious example that if after working at companies, people continue to work at home at night to get promotions, they will not have time to rest and enjoy other things else in life, which soon makes them depressed. Second, just focus on working, practicing, and spend less time for family, lovers that will make a distance between people which makes people can not blissful. For instance, people do not invest time in relationship, when they need their friends, lovers, no one will be there for them so they will be more hopeless with life.
In order to address the aforementioned issue, people should balance time for working and relaxing. People should take a holiday after a period of hard-working to charge energy themselves and after that, they can work more effectively. In fact, all governments apprehend this method which is the reason for the existing summer holiday in a year. People also can spend more time with their lover to share daily problems and have more support for success in life. This is indeed a wonderful solution because no one can live satisfied just with a lot of money and substance but without family and friends.
In conclusion, the problem that young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy is an urgent problem for society. Fortunately, it can be deal with some certain solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88650306748 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45138090068 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506134969325 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7325339175 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317884335177 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131350650692 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109046722765 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26246655052 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111676688866 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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