As some dominant languages are more widely spoken all over the world, many minority languages are dying out. Some people think that it is unnescessary to save these languages. To what extend do you agree with this perspective?
There are a great number of different languages in the world. Nevertheless, some international languages are widely spoken around the world, while other minority ones gradually tend to be eliminated.
On the one hand, speaking some main languages in all countries helps us easily communicate with each other. Consequently, it makes the interaction and relationship among countries or continents become closer and more effectively. To be specific, people will not need to worry about how to make foreigners understand what they want to express or how to see through what they are talking about. As an example, many foreign tourists come to Viet Nam annually. In fact, many Vietnamese do not know English, thus it is quite hard for them to ask natives for something they need.
On the other hand, their languages not only represent a community or a region but also their unique cultural traditions. Specially, each nation has its own mother touge and it distinguish this country from another. To illustrate, in olden days, the ancient Egypt carved their language called hieroglyphs into stone slabs which is invaluable now. However, if this language disappear, we can not discover the traditional myths of this civilization.
To conclude, although the fewer language we speak, the easier we communicate with each other, many minority languages contribute to the ancient culture which we are responsible to remain. Personally, i think that we all are aware of saving these languages anyways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, while, i think, in fact, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2510460251 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90050218742 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677824267782 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1426509694 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5384615385 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292269504984 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956052090081 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680904093146 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170676623758 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053743952146 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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