Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s modern world, knowing more than one language or learning other dialect can help us understand easily and improves our communication skills as well. Over recent years, there are number of arguments on making this language learning compulsory at primary education level rather than secondary. This essay will focus on both benefits and drawbacks of the mentioned issue.
To begin with, introducing foreign language learning at primary level helps children communicate with people in other country during international travel. To illustrate, often parents take their kids to tours on international trips and children will not be able to understand what they’re speaking and they can’t enjoy as we do. So, in order to overcome this problem it is beneficial to introduce foreign language learning at very starting stage of their education. Also, learning a foreign language at this stage will make children perfectionists and when they try to speak in that language they might feel it very easy in future. Moreover, it enhances the overall communication skills of individual.
However, there are few disadvantages of this approach. Opponents of this argument claim that if such learning is made mandatory then there is a chance of educational institutions to cash this situation. In order to earn money they impose very high fee and this will affect poor children who will not be able to manage the payment. Another major drawback is this rule can stress out students. For example, children at this age should spend their time in learning basic lessons and should not strain themselves dedicating more time on these additional learnings.
To sum up, I believe that the advantages of this like enhancing child’s communication skills outweigh any other disadvantages. Both parents and educational institutions should work collectively to ensure that such measure is made mandatory for the betterment of the individual and society as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4025974026 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95709180981 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581168831169 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0581607882 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296984736323 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944687440012 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605234203568 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167362178111 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330144915601 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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