Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
it is better for children to start learning a foreign languages at primary school than secondary school is a hot topic for debate. Even those opinion have both negative and positive things, I still believe that it is easier for a child study a new language than a teenager in secondary school.
The first and the most important reason is children have excellent ability in learning a new thing like a new language. According to some research, at this moment, a pupil in primary school can improve pronunciation and vocabulary quickly because the mother languages doesn’t affect strongly to them. In addition, in primary school, children seem like have more time to study foreign language than in secondary school. A teenager can spend more time for entertainment than learning that make them pay less attention to study some useful things like a language. As a result, a secondary student learn foreign language will have less time to practice rather than a primary student.
By contrast, a children study a new language in primary school can lead to some outcome. it can be clearly seen that, pupil can grow up with some mother languages problem if they don’t have true method to learning foreign language. All over of the world, there are many children can speak mother language fluently due to study a new language in wrong way. Furthermore, teacher in primary school need to improve their language skill to inspire children so government should care about training for them. Besides that, family and school need to spend more time to observer the way children learn new languages to make sure that they study on the true path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94584837545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55275758924 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2021291534 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425045719637 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191539509592 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123278506198 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340812305591 0.151304729494 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876704796796 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.