Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
people have different views about living in abroad where people have to use foreign language can lead to some complex problems like social problems or individual problems. personally, I believe that, migration worker , student or resident will face many issue when they living in a country and have to speak native language.
there are various social problems when a person live in a new country and force to use foreign language. Firstly, they will find it difficult to communicate with the neighbourhood due to language barrier. In order to make friend with a local people or get some help from neighbourhood they migration resident have to use native language which they can’t speak fluency. As a result, some local civilian can’t understand and help them. Moreover, lack of language understanding is cause of some trouble about the local culture. For instance, if a foreigner come to Korea where traditional culture is very complex , they will make some mistake in daily life like when eating with an older people. it can be clearly seen that there are many social problems that a person have to overcome when they have to use native language while living in a new country.
On the other hand, foreigner will get some practical problems when they have to use foreign language when living abroad. The biggest issue is finding a job. when a foreigner can’t use native language , consequently, their colleagues may not able to exchange information with them. Thus, it is impossible for them to work together. Furthermore, another demerits is foreigner will feel it difficult to use some local product because they can’t read the direction. For example, they can’t learn how to cook with local food or fix some troubles of the electronic gadgets. Last but not least, people who live in abroad may not find a local partners if they can't use native language. A person who can not use native languages will not able to talk with lovers. Hence, it will impossible for them to stick together or go on a date.
In conclusion, living in a new country without native language is cause of many social problems and practical problems that migration resident have to face and learn how to deal with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97587131367 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62847777769 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434316353887 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1365158858 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6842105263 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57894736842 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322520392486 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112681523761 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104165259502 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267130875365 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770252232535 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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