Some feel that the effect of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses. While others think they are negative.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this modern and age, advertising has become increasingly widespread. There has also been some heated debates over its impacts. I personally think that advertising is a far-reaching negative due to its effect on the average citizen, though it is apparently beneficial for businesses.
It is hard to deny the positive boon that advertising has contributed to a diversity of industries. Back in the old days, especially in the 1990s, the growth of Vietnamese in particular ushered in an age of rampant commercial opportunity. Domestic corporations raging from soft drink companies to automobile makers to airlines grasped the advantage of the looming medium of television to achieve a wider audience. By enchanting the core of human psychology, they were able to tap into a seemingly limitless market which eventually spread globally and is now upheld by ceaselessly efficient and profitable online market methods.
Nevertheless, advertising chiefly serves to distract and seduce. The purpose of advertisements is not merely to inform. Consumers can find information about products that they are keen on from a great deal of sources. Advertising lures individuals and prompts new desires that distract from healthier styles of living. For instance, the average person would be better served by eating a healthy diet and exercising on daily basis. However, far-reaching advertisements for fast food make this difficult, in some cases impossible, to accomplish. And also, many consumer products had been generalised. Therefore, it is clear that people are being drawn unhealthily towards their worse impulses.
Inconclusion, the merits of advertising for the business world do not overshadow its psychology impact on individuals. Though, I believe the world without advertising is not viable, it is not impossible to limit one’s exposure
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in particular, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53546099291 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19712072127 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6041569199 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8235294118 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187512022094 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517307318356 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451471863848 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105310025421 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410309829658 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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