Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
There is a consensus among people that both individuals and enterprises can be beneficial from commercials, whereas some people deem that advertising has a negative impact. Personally, I am in favor of the former view.
On the one hand, commercials can have an adverse impact on individuals in some cases. First of all, nowadays, children are the target audience of most advertisements, which children can have negative effects on their health. Since many fast food and junk food companies these days try to make their products appear to be appealing to children, unfortunately, most children do not understand the concept of advertising and are easily persuaded to purchase these unhealthy foods. As a consequence, they can be at risk of many serious health issues, such as obesity and diabetes. Moreover, commercials temp people to purchase unnecessary things. Hence, Customers might find it hard to resist the temptation of products which are advertised way beyond their expectation.
On the other hand, I opine that advertisements come in handy for both individuals and enterprises. With regard to the former, the product commercials help people in analyses about the specialty of product they are going to purchase and also descriptions. To expain it, advertisements can assist customers to think deeply about the products's proper use and many cons to not utilize well in the given time period. To illustrate, the majority of facial cream companies show information related to their product, such as how to use it on the face and restrictions to keep it away from children. On the second aspect, companies can approach prospective customers, capturing more market share and business growth. As a result, businesses can witness an increase in sales and profits.
In conclusion, although advertisements have an adverse inpact on individuals in some cases, I believe that both individuals and enterprises can take many advantages of advertisements.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fast food', 'a good deal of fast food'.
Suggestion: much fast food; a good deal of fast food
...negative effects on their health. Since many fast food and junk food companies these days try ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in some cases, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3430420712 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13731303972 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2889815586 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170509389963 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583925875343 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610911397129 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117505517243 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258992906968 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun food seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fast food', 'a good deal of fast food'.
Suggestion: much fast food; a good deal of fast food
...negative effects on their health. Since many fast food and junk food companies these days try ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in some cases, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3430420712 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13731303972 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2889815586 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170509389963 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583925875343 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610911397129 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117505517243 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258992906968 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.