Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
In today's modern world, advertising has a dominant role in marketing. However, many of the strategies used to sell products or services are considered by a big part of the population, as unethical and unacceptable. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will discuss several points supporting my opinion.
To begin, the primary role of advertising is to introduce products and the benefits of having them. Although, every company's organization's goal is financial profit. In order to increase their sales, several times manipulate emotionally their consumers. For example, during weekends when children are not in schools, there is an increased rate of advertisements regarding toys, so most of the children could see them and try to convince their parents to buy these products for them. This is totally unethical.
To continue, it is evident that a huge number of advertisements attack the personality of several groups and especially the female sex. Since the beginning of advertising, the role model of the man being more superior than the woman existed. Several examples were commercials of cleaning products in which the woman was cleaning the dishes while her husband was reading his newspaper. However, advertisers would never use this technique nowadays, they released a different form of sexist advertisements. Women with minimal amount of clothing introducing male perfumes are unfortunately very common.
To conclude, despite the fact that advertising is just the way to inform the audience about new products, now apparently focuses on different things. That is why the government should introduce new laws and stop this phenomenon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, regarding, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45769230769 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03629669715 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669230769231 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.561484709 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150563754719 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476569472993 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422241417101 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908725172111 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609959129059 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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