Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
education is not only a mean for gaining and upgrading one's skill to get a suitable carrier for future but also it gives an opportunity for students to sharpen their social abilities as well. there are many cotradictory around this important matter that I intend to discuss about.
As a matter of fact, the main goal of any University is to prepare knowledge seekers for their future professional responsibilities. Accordingly, some believe that the solely tasks for undergraduate centers is to make sure that their alumni will get a dissent job. any county in the world requires well-trained work forces to acumiulate wealth and fortune for the next generation to guaranty the successors comfort and ease. this will never happen till a community used creative workers which educated from universes. it goes without saying that any society can thrives with the perseverance of its young and hopeful members.
On the other hand, some other people think that the universities a loge their special trainings for future job of their students, these places need to develop themselves for bringing up well characterized workers which serve honestly, determination, and above all ethic for the society. these workers need to learn work ethics as well as other social manners in the university. By the same token universities are not only responsable for the learners' brains but also they are in charge of their souls nurturing.
On balance, having consider both way of looking to the university roll for their youngsters; I come up with this idea that the university should be like one's second family and make ready the person for his future life in the society with all of its wonders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, honestly, if, look, second, so, well, as a matter of fact, as well as, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0394265233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7907731627 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1565749998 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.818181818 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212185725712 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710384526629 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479572340994 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124708009369 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00966842530597 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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