Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates to get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Some people claim that graduating from university assists students to build up better career such as to obtain a prestigious position in a company. However, others argue that university degree brings more merits for not only pupils but also the community. From my point of view, higher education enables people to make the right decision regarding career or social life.
On the one hand, in today's materialistic world, the issue of financial security and a high-paying job is the major determinant, consequently, most students pursue higher studies in acclaimed universities. Additionally, the organizations are required higher academic degree from renowned university which creates competition among people. Despite of sophisticated knowledge and skill, they do not get a better job opportunity. For instance, when both a graduate and a high school pass out candidate apply for the same job, clearly, the graduate will be selected for the position. Similarly, even professionals pursue a management degree from prestigious universities to climb up the corporate ladder.
On the other hand, from a wider perspective, the advantages of university education are not restricted to the individual's income. Firstly, it allows the student to meet different people from diverse ethnicities cultures and socioeconomic backgrounds. This helps to develop a more tolerant approach towards other fellow human beings and decreases the incidents of cultural intolerances, thus, racism which often knock out the peace of the world. Secondly, higher qualifications enhance our knowledge, and make us better human in the society, as well as help to understand the ethical and moral value.
In conclusion, getting a reputable job is required to have a university degree that many people argue, while a few people think that, it not only helps individual but also our community. My opinion is that, this grant us to make right choice what to do in our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ity education are not restricted to the individuals income. Firstly, it allows the student ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40789473684 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05177364305 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4470541348 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6428571429 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259305582957 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825401652127 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575364319896 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14941907696 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227832870358 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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