Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There have been heated controversies over letting children have their own preferences. While some people argue that it is risky to permit children to have their own decisions since it will lead to a society with selfish individuals, others believe that children should be entitled to the freedom of choice. While there is some compelling evidence for the former clause, from my perspective, the latter makes more sense.
On the one hand, opposites of giving children the liberty to decision-making highlight their concerns of creating a society with thoughtless individuals. It is often assumed that children are prone to think for themselves without taking other aspects into consideration, which eventually results in a cold-hearted generation with selfish people. However, it is not always the case when permitting to have their own choices. In fact, children’s satisfaction after achieving their personal wishes can give them a mental shift to give thoughts to their surroundings.
On the other hand, supporters of giving children the right to freely make their decisions highlight the benefits regarding the improvements in children’s maturity and responsibility. First and foremost, it is indisputable that children making their own decisions can help them to be more independent and enhance their maturity. To be more specific, if a child is exposed to regular problems in terms of their personal affairs, they will gradually become less reliant on their parents’ support and be accustomed to dealing with personal issues. In addition, if children are allowed to have their own preferences, they will be more responsible with their decisions and be willing to admit their mistakes whenever problems occur. This will eventually create better versions for children, helping them to be more accountable.
In conclusion, while it is conceivable why people are wondering to let children freely make up their minds, I believe that by doing so, children will not only be more responsible but also more thoughtful and considerate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02498234304 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4314419739 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.923076923 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301660355335 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124219167063 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618479507049 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204570513819 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288886441943 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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