Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people assert that it is essential for children to make their own decisions. There is a significant and healthy argument that if children make personal decisions about daily matters then it may lead to society of people. In my opinion, children should be allowed to make their own choices.
On the one hand, we live in a society where we are taught to be responsible and independent after some age. Therefore, it is necessary to give permission to children to make personal decisions on small stuffs like choice of food or clothes etc. Likewise, when the child grows up in future he will be more decisive in nature towards life. It builds a sense of self-confidence in child when he decides something and achieves it. He or She is more productive when he faces real world challenges because of the past lessons of making wrong decisions. Eventually they learn how to plan, budget and choose on buying something that really matters to them. Also, a child deserves to make choices on such matters because things like food, clothes, games, etc are something which he or she solely uses it.
On the other hand, giving total authority to children to make personal decisions lead to bad results too. Sometimes they may make unnecessary expenses towards their clothes, food or games. This leads to wrong habit and demanding nature of them. In a middle class family, it becomes difficult for parents to fulfill all the demands of their child. For instance, a low earning father cannot afford an expensive toy for his child. Making personal decisions every time can get destructive when a child does not listen to his parents and think that they are always right. These are few reasons why children move out and stay in a different house once they grow up.
To wrap up, I would reiterate that though it is not practical to give full authority to children to take personal decisions but if they are guided well and controlled to some extent then this can lead to important self-development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80523255814 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59691639905 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55523255814 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9123738611 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228777393593 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076160267227 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834116634655 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146397716164 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113167447707 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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