Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
The children’s leisure is a disputable issue, when people from one side claim that it is significant for kids spending non-formal time between school and other activities with parents, whereas others consider that it might have even negative influence. This essay will examine both viewS and explain why it is crucial for young generation to have different connections with surrounders.
On the one hand, if children WERE staying all the time near and under control of their parents, it might save them from harmful peer pressure, which they could find outside. Presumably it will be more likely that the adults WOULD notice their child’s truancy or clues of bullying at school if they allocateD to their kid’s SCHEDULE plenty of the time. Moreover, this feature assists the youngsters to ASPIRE THEIR PARENTS’ role model and ASSIMILATE codes of conduct of their families, PREPARING them for the future life in the society. The point is that the young people have more opportunities to implement behavioural patternS from their parents in natural circumstances.
However, keeping children close to the adults is not only measure to prevent juvenile delinquency and anti-social behaviour. Often it may have an opposite outcome, when youngsters tend to do the reverse actions wishing to prove their personality especially when they are teenagers. In addition, it is useful for the children to converse with other people Especially with the contemporaries. The evidential fact about babies witnesses us that these infants, who talk with their peers much, start to speak normal speech earlier than THOSE who spend all the time with parents EXCLUSIVELY. Thus, the conversation with other kids contributes to ONE’s cognitive improvement AT THE EARLIER STAGE OF A LIFE.
It seems that impossible to deny the parentAL contribution INto development OF THE YOUNG, nevertheless, the time outside of the family could be valuable too. It would appear that this questions DEMAND ~to ~ pursuING someWHAT balance between THR two edgeS.
- All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school. how far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language? 89
- Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects 84
- A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 70
- Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion 89
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially, among young people.Identify the possible causes of this trend , and propose some solutions you think would be effective. 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41433021807 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87871950066 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619937694704 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1788247162 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250644228241 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825386714118 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444245640343 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136706752908 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597883121443 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.