Some people believe everyone has the right to get university education. To what extent do you agree government should make it free to all people no matter of their financial background?
It is a common right for individual to be educated. And for many people, studying in university can help them get better job and that is also the main reason for them to enter the university. Although there will be more number of new students if the government make the college study free for all people, in my opinion I more advocate that every students should pay for university study.
On the one hand, if the government shoulder all payment for citizens’ advanced education study, obviously people who live under poverty line can also attain in school. And with more number of people acquire higher education, people’s value and their competent are improved. A truth is, people who get higher education are play as the primary role in promoting social economy. Therefore the more highly educated person work in job, the better development a country may have.
On the other hand, it is reasonable for government to refuse cover all higher educational fee for citizens. First and foremost, it can reduce financial pressure for countries’ administration, since the study fee can cover some proportion of colleges’ research disbursement. Another reason is that students also gain a lot from university not only for academic area but also decrease the difficulty in application for job. Accordingly, students should carry some financial responsibility.
From my perspective, both the government and students should take responsibility for the cost since they both get profits from it. But government could help poor students by setting scholarship or offering interest-free loan.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35433070866 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05822149385 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2537249528 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186425104251 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072866478521 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472864432398 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112242752243 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299013286161 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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