Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the government should implement a free-college policy for students irrespective of their financial status, this essay strongly disagree with this suggestion because it can cause unemployment and the states’s budget deficits.
Firstly, the exemption from college fees education is closely associated with the increasing of unemployment rate. To be more spercific, it is undeniable that when the college tuitions are fee, there will be an excessive number of workforce are educated. However, this trend creates a hyper-competitive labour market as the supply for non-manual jobs is considerably higher than the demand. As a result, many people will struggling in finding jobs, eventhough they did take part in universities.
Secondly, the government which opt to exempt students from higher education fees will put a strain on the state treasury as well as individuals. In other words, a provision of free college education will cost a considerable amount of the national budget, which result in less money spent on other areas of interest such as national security or military. Furthermore, the budget deficits can be covered by a larger amount of tax which will be imposed on the public. Therefore, this trend might hurt society in the long run.
In conclusion, I am a fervent opponent of the view that the government should subsidize tuition fees for all students. This is due to the fact that tuition exemption might exert certain drawbacks in terms of unnecessary competitions in the job market and a serious burden on the national funding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25099601594 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02245791061 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5745535899 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108430033969 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401138448694 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433359324693 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724449208289 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334534267043 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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