Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about what factors attract people when deciding on a career. While handsome salary is important to some extent, I would argue that positive environment is much more crucial for employees.
On the one hand, high paying jobs have several advantages. Firstly, people need money in order to meet their basic needs. For example, they have to buy foods, pay bills and accommodation fees. Therefore, a job that helps them to earn much money could allow them to cover those needs and reduce their financial burden. If people choose jobs which do not have large income, it would be difficult for them to cover their expenses. Secondly, people who have a great amount of money could fulfill their dreams. For instance, they could spend on luxurious items or enjoy premium services. As a result, they could have a happier life, which might make them become a good role model for other people to follow.
On the other hand, there are some reasons why a good working environment is more important. First, due to good personal relationships and positive atmosphere in workplace, individuals could increase productivity and employee engagement. For example, having a good manager or friendly colleagues can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. If people work in an unhealthy environment, they could be discouraged. Additionally, since people spend most of their time at their workplace, a satisfying working atmosphere helps them to reduce stress and pressure. This could allow them to work comfortably. If they choose a poor environment, they would suffer from tension every day.
In conclusion, while well paid jobs can have several advantages, I believe that a healthy environment is a much more important factor.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17586206897 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76165565809 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9178269838 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241449526218 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775381437146 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758117504497 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172625179242 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555181465584 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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