Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is very controversial whether police officers should carry firearms for security and the public have different opinions about the issue. Some people disagree that the police need to take guns, while to some extent I agree that policemen should carry guns.
A part of people think the police taking guns would cause a higher level of violence for some reasons. Firstly, there is a risk of accidents if the police are allowed to take guns. Passengers might be involved in the fight between police officers and criminals. It is reported by a research of National Taiwan university that there are thousands of accidents which lead to the injuries or death of the innocent people because of the shooting. Secondly, gun ownership of the police is unnecessary in many industrialized countries. Due to the low crime rates caused by high standards of living and education, policemen do not need to carry guns to deter criminals.
On the other hand, I believe gun ownership of the police is necessary. One of the reasons is guns can be used as self-defense for the police. In some countries with high crime rates, criminals often have strong weapons because of the prosperous black markets of firearms. Having guns can ensure the security of the police force when they fight against the criminals. Also, carrying guns can effectively prevent the potential criminals from committing crimes. The police patrolling on the streets with firearms is a strong deterrence for the drug dealers or the gangs in the communities.
In conclusion, although there are several disadvantages of gun ownership of policemen, I still prefer that police officers should carry guns because having guns is the most efficient way of keeping social security.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09824561404 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73336261048 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9741027278 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219570528243 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775902177583 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768597412827 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140078993149 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822610732589 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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