Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactoryjob or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As social beings every day we face some kind of incidents and they are debatable according to the individual. Most of them believe that accepting a bad situation is the best choice, while the rest of the people highlight the better approach is improving such situations. This essay will discuss both perspectives and conclude why improving bad situations help.
People face bad situations most of the time it is not because of their actions but the other factors. On one hand, people think accepting such situations help them to move on and reduce stress. For an example, working in a company that treat people like slaves and not appreciating could be stress full for some individuals. Further more people take drastic actions due to these incidents and ended up fighting with management or quitting the job. But if you simply accept the situation and move on your mind will be relaxed and motivate you to consider other life goals and responsibilities.
However, some argue that improving aforesaid situations will help you to avoid happening such situations in future and furthermore will motivate you to be proactive. As an example, if you have a shortage of money and you feel broke, if you’re in improving mentality you will try to consider cutdown expenses or a secondary income like part time job. So that not only it helps you to fix the present situation, but also you are avoiding this from happening again.
In conclusion, it’s depends from person to person how they face bad situation and deciding to accept or improve. In my opinion, I believe improvising in such situations will be more beneficial than accepting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...own expenses or a secondary income like part time job. So that not only it helps you to f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03636363636 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77736780078 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8788480723 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263033963695 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948289668569 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671468777038 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141084096445 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661530185361 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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