Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are comments noted to convey that approving a negative circumstance is the best, including poverty or not being promoted in a career. Despite that, countless people suppose it has never been more superior when individuals learn how to experience and make a dramatic development, I agree with those who believe that we should strive to better these situations.
On the one hand, people are advised to be satisfied with what life has brought to them. Advocates of this view argue the change is hazardous and requires massive contribution. By being pleased with unfavorable situations, at least residents may have a better sense of security and in addition, psychologically, grow their happiness to some extent. For instance, when a person tries to move on to another job, nothing is able to be guaranteed that there is more satisfaction in that work. Furthermore, in some serious situations such as the Covid-19 pandemic or severe economic downturns, it would be hazardous, and virtually impossible for citizens to change the circumstances positively.
Conversely, I side with those who desire to move up in a better life. First, it is obvious that the advancement of human civilization would have never been this modernized if the great-talented inventors had not done their best to complete their inventions. Thanks to the efforts of scientists such as Thomas Edison, light bulbs and various things were created and have changed our lives so far. Additionally, the most compelling argument is only by solving existing issues, not by simply accepting them, people have opportunities to discover their capabilities, be their best version as well as live their lives to the fullest. There have been entrepreneurs, athletics, or scientists of all over the world who achieved overwhelming success due to their never give up mindset and keep on efforts like Pixar Animation Studios and their well-known inspirational quotes: "Just keep swimming". Consequently, I have a faith in most cases that all efforts will be rewarded.
To conclude, though the change might cause risk and losses, it is never superfluous to be the better version of people's selves, not only this behavior brings great success, but also help individuals identify their potential and live a more meaningful life. Thus, I believe that pursuing excellence and success will come to you, as a celebrity once said.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, furthermore, if, may, so, thus, well, at least, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26233766234 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04227369677 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592207792208 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4056062837 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.066666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126126019247 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040398131478 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257403454913 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749230823542 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333794726891 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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