Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There have been heated controversies over the way people respond to bad situations, job dissatisfaction or lack of money for instance. While some people admit that it is better to accept these difficulties, others believe in the need to try to adjust and get away from the circumstances. Although there is some compelling evidence for the first clause, from my perspective, the latter one makes more sense.
On the one hand, supporters of accepting dilemmas highlight the safety when leaving the situations unchanged. To put it simply, it is indisputable that constancy is one of the most important factors in life, which provides people with a great sense of relief and feelings of certainty. Moreover, people are unlikely to tackle bad situations for fear of making things worse and placing themselves in more challenging positions. For instance, a man who is the only financial source of a family tends to be unwilling to leave his incumbent job and seek better-paid positions in another company, worrying that he will lose all his existing assets in that big gamble. Therefore, it is believed that people should leave hindrances alone and accept their inconveniences.
However, on the other hand, opponents of the former statement emphasize the benefits when striving for positive adjustments and escape from bad situations. It is widely believed that when putting effort into improving rough circumstances, people will be more flexible in dealing with dilemmas or coping with challenges. To be more specific, students struggling with their projects should be encouraged to independently figure out the best solutions, which helps them to be more proactive and confident when encountering demanding tasks and simultaneously enhance their problem-solving skills. Moreover, experience is another notable benefit when trying to adjust and overcome obstacles. Throughout the arduous journeys, whether people succeed or not, knowledge and lessons are among the most important things they can receive.
In conclusion, although it is conceivable why many people accept their difficulties and make no changes to them, I believe that the benefits of striving for better situations are crucially important since they can help individuals in terms of problem-solving skills and self-experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47740112994 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12352873215 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.718673802 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190583544523 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687844741243 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526850697504 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123242667844 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044181135045 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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