Throughout life it happens that sometimes for several reasons people have to accept difficult or unpleasant jobs to face up to financial hardhips or unexpected problems. Many also do not move from a bad situation because they believe that trying to make a change would be actually cause more problems. On the other hand, there are many who claim that it is always better to try to improve their situation, no matter whether the outcome could be even worse.
In this essay I will briefly analyze the reasons why certain individuals prefer to maintain their status quo, while other are more prone to change their condition.
It is not always easy to make changes in our life. Some habits are hard to die so that it is quite difficult for some individuals to take on opportunities which would hidden the potential of improving their life as wells as of making things worse. People who do not have a high education degree or are full of debts, usually accept every job they are offered in order to meet the ends and to have enough money to pay the bills. For those people thus trying to leave their current situation to embrace an unknown route is just too risky. In case of fail they would find themselves in a worse situation they were before. Those persons are so destined to stuck in a viciuos circle.
In contrast to this attitude, others try to escape from their temporary condition. They know that maybe a whole life is at stack and everything that could be bring a new light in their lifes is worth an attempt. From my point of view, this is the right way to stay in this world. Nothing changes unless one takes action and sees happiness, satisfation or financial stability as something that has to be actively pursued. There is no point to me to accept an inconvienient situation for a long time or even worse for an entire life. Trying to improve is always worth the effort.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have hidden' or 'hide'?
Suggestion: have hidden; hide
...ls to take on opportunities which would hidden the potential of improving their life a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, briefly, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as to, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58579881657 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.412634368 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9718998445 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170401134625 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537869006818 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396862970557 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100006884325 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553864306226 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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