Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job of shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is naively suggested by some people that in a rough situation like financial issues, we should bear it. On the opposing side, it is believed by some people that we should strive to make the situation better which seems to be logical. If we want to escape from an adverse condition we should put in the effort.
It is claimed that in an appalling situation we should let things go and stop worrying about it, because thinking about that would rise stress and result in a less healthy lifestyle. As an example, provided we are in a financial crisis, we wouldn’t have a good life and cannot sleep properly unless we stop worrying about money. Set against this view is that we should make an effort in order to get out of this situation, in that without it we may never get out of this adverse situation.
Mentally beneficial as not trying to get out of the bad situation can be, striving is a price for having better opportunities to pay. Only in this way can we have an outstanding lifestyle. If my professor had not studied hard in school, he would not have made it to higher educations, as an instance. This, however, is true that people should attach importance to health. If we get stress every time we get caught in a bad situation, we might not function appropriately and may hurt ourselves mentally.
On balance, it appears that this issue is a mixed blessing and if we misuse it we might hurt ourselves. Only in a balanced way between not worrying too much and striving can we have a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation better which seems to be logical. If we want to escape from an adverse condi...
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Line 13, column 171, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to can'
Suggestion: to can
...ween not worrying too much and striving can we have a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54909090909 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60954636506 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7340604595 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53846153846 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0740534422454 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368801629745 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448545467776 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543493346007 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360021740372 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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