It is a growing belief that we could achieve a better life and ourselves by working hard. Therefore, when it is said to be best to accept a bad situation like a disappointing job or lack of money, I would totally disagree with that attitude.
They might claim that people feel happier when they accept what is given to them by life, otherwise it will be tougher process to be lost in endless pursuit. For example, if someone is targeting a better job, or a bigger fortune, there will always be a better position in front of you and a higher salary to fight for.
However, in my opinion, this attitude will lead to a worse life without any possibility to even remain the current state. People who accept an unsatisfactory job finds no enthusiasm in his work and will lose interest over time, to be found less competent in his job eventually. As a result, he/she is likely to become jobless and a burden of others.
An effective way to avoid this risk is to keep pushing yourself to move forward. In terms of a job, one could take training lessons to improve himself/herself in order to get a promotion or to change for a new promising job. This will not only solve the problem of being lack of money, but also will ensure one ability to face unexpected challenges and incidents in life.
There are other similar situations in life, such a bad shape of body, a narrow apartment. Without the acceptance of this given things, people can be more motivated to fight for a fitness and a larger and more comfortable house etc.
To conclude, to accept the bad situation in life may result in worse circumstance but trying to improve such situations can earn a life with better quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59075907591 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63240165978 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9459602876 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192065465303 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651558959631 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488990171479 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102960894531 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312179119478 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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