Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
bad situations such as unsatisfactory of job or money shortage are unavoidable in your life time and some believe that the best way to get rid of it is to accept it. however, there are many opinions which argue that it is better to improve the situation. this essay will delineate both perspectives and give valid explanations as well as examples.
On the one hand, accepting bad situations will cause less problems. many people have to forcefully choose the worse option due to the reason that they do not want to renew everything. Although it is not comfortable or suitable to deal with that situation, trying to improve that choice can possibly cause more things to deal with, which leads to a worse situation. For instance, my uncle, who had uncomfortably worked in a bank company, changed to another field, which was business. however, business was irrelevant to him so he had to find another bank company to work.
On the other hand, improving bad situations can reduce stress and tiresome. unsatisfactory job and shortage of money are the long-term problem and they should be handled as quickly as possible. people can easily feel stressed or tired when they have to deal and suffer with this chaos. As a result, they can easily give up and waste their time on doing worthless thing to deal with these situations.
In conclusion, while some people choose to accept the horrible situation, I whole-heartedly believe that bad time should be tried to improve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.916 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76471770711 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5400072373 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321063153477 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100671416611 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982076432406 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205621030838 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133300722842 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.