Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
it is undeniable that music is a good method to bring people from different cultures and ages together. this essay will delineate my opinion with valid explanation as well as examples about this statement.
On the one hand, people may share the taste of music with each other. The melody, rhythm of one song is fixed for every listener in either different cultures or ages. Consequently, people from each nation can understand the meaning of lyrics in the same way. For instance, my Danish friend and I both share the same favorite singer, which is Charlie puth, a famous from America. Even though we neither meet each other frequently nor come from the same nation, our conversation is endless because we always talk about the songs of Charlie puth. Hence, music is a form of communication and maintaining relationship with each other.
On the other hand, music can sometimes be irrelevant. Today, in music industry, there is no definition of “filtration”. it is true that these days, music can be released at any time without filtering for its content and language. there are many cases that the lyrics of the songs lead to misunderstanding and offence. A perfect illustration for this is Kanye West, a famous singer wrote a song with explicit content and showed an offence directly to another singer, Taylor Swift. His song had awoken a whole community and became the most controversial topic by the time. As a result, there were two separate society, one went for Taylor and one for Kanye. Thus, music can possibly not be the best way to make people understand other cultures and ages.
To conclude with the statement, I can strongly state that music is a double-edged sword as it can and cannot be the favorable way to bring people together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, it is true, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83839547789 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5637911379 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5882352941 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238356422532 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834057045777 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997038725937 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189454042367 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102649586194 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.