Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Sharing of information is becoming more common, now days. Many argue that it is good to exchange information without limitations among certain entities like schools, companies etc. Whereas, others believe that it is too vital to share. This essay will discuss why sharing of information should be curbed as well as threats it poses.
Firstly, mining of data and exchanging it with other demography of people will be beneficial. By this I mean, exchange of details among students plus scientist would help to complete their work within required amount of time. When it comes to organizations, it can help them for future developments. While I agree that delivering one’s knowledge to others has advantages but it has some demerits too. First of all, it will create confusion among students due to irrelevant topics. Second, scientist fames and credits would be given to another person. Lastly, in companies their financial dealing with their client’s documents might be leaked. For example, recent studies suggest that people in UK discloses 10% of information to others which are too sensitive. Therefore, individuals should deliver adequate amount of data to others.
Secondly, disclosing information that is too sensitive in nature can have adverse effects. To be more precise, information about government’s security blue prints, weapons statics and secret research facility details can be leaked publicly which might result in compromise of the states sovereign. For instance, India’s nuclear program location was leaked by neighboring countries spy’s which had endangered several innocent lives. In addition, some information’s are too costly due to its nature. For example, scientists would not share data because they do not gain anything and they charge for certain money. Based on above examples, the data that puts one’s nation in danger should stay hidden.
To sum up, individuals share information often. This essay discussed why information should be shared as much as possible and it values. In my opinion, delivery of knowledge needed to be limited and value based data should be hidden (or) should be charged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48955223881 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92409963142 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608955223881 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1516196446 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5909090909 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286566834939 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899887011835 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860471676238 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190669392182 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680699847969 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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