Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and five your opinion.
With the development of internet technology, sharing information has become easier in the modern world. Some individuals might think that information should be exchanged freely in every domain, while others might argue that key information should keep in secret. This essay discusses both of views and why I believe that we should only reveal selected information to public.
On the one hand, the progress of modern society is based on the accumulation of knowledge. A new idea can offer new living way or even produce another new invention which consistently pushes our society toward higher living level. For example, the on-line website “Wikipedia” has become the biggest free knowledge reservoir that allows anyone to reach enormous useful reference to do any research any time anywhere at low cost.
On the other hand, however, some information may be too crucial for specific organizations or researchers that the leakage of their know-how may hurt their interest. For instance, a scientist may lose his or her motivation for the further research if the experiment in progress is copied by other scientist; a company may stop developing new products if its competitors always know their plan before new inventions are published on the market. Therefore, poor information management will bring catastrophic damage to the economic activity.
To sum up, although the free flow of information has positive effects on building a modern society, in my opinion, we should choose carefully and protect the critical information in each domain in order to avoid losing motivation of innovation in the community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... new living way or even produce another new invention which consistently pushes our society t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38039215686 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02581485811 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650980392157 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2249951343 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.2 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212890741882 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804032070441 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696363228962 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11497560265 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955323769726 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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