Some people believe that modern designs for schools and offices with more open spaces are necessary. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such spaces? Give your opinion.

While some folks think that contemporary layouts for schools and offices with more wide spaces are essential, i am totally in favour of this idea. This essay will discuss firstly the significant disadvantages and secondly, the benefits of expanded extents with relevant examples.

To begin with, the prohibitive cost is one of the paramount disadvantages of the pattern. Because the wider area needs a series of paintings, tiles and a pool of skilled manpower who can be as costly as doctors, and the routine maintenance is sky-high too. Next, the invasion of privacy remains a great inconvenience ...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cond place, schools and offices can save money in spite of the high expenditure o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59130434783 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23797567199 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657971014493 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3664138529 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219741145797 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600829066871 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590596611333 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137129544648 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540725372905 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 345 350
No. of Characters: 1877 1500
No. of Different Words: 229 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.31 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.441 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.129 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.562 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.779 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.023 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5