Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In life, people has to make a lot of right and wrong choices to move along. Some people opine that these days’ people are available with a lots of options than in the past. This essay will discuss that why the number of options has increased recently and why it has also increased the complexity of choosing the viable option.
To begin with, making choices are the basic ingredient of one’s life. Because of the recent trends and advancements, its availability has been further accelerated. These days, we have to choose from a lot of different options in our daily life that can be in the context of feeding habits, groceries shopping or picking a good job etc. For example, due to the internationalization, these days we have to pick a good job from vast range of local and foreign companies. Thus, recent advancement has increased the options availability to a great extent.
Subsequently, in the past, the range of making choices were relatively minimum. While less number of brands were available in the market, people would face no difficulty in choosing the right product. For instance, about a decades ago, there was 2 or 3 mobile brands in the market, but these days thousand mobile brands are introduced. Hence, making a preferences these days are more confusing than it was in the past.
In conclusion, the options available to choose from is either increased or decreased is a controversial issue. This essay discussed that why the recent trends accelerated the availability of choices as well as the complexity. In my opinion, I totally agree with the above statement.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...t these days’ people are available with a lots of options than in the past. This essay...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'options'' or 'option's'?
Suggestion: options'; option's
...s, recent advancement has increased the options availability to a great extent. Sub...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decade' or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: a decade; decades
... the right product. For instance, about a decades ago, there was 2 or 3 mobile brands in ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...le brands in the market, but these days thousand mobile brands are introduced. Hence, ma...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a preference' or simply 'preferences'?
Suggestion: a preference; preferences
...le brands are introduced. Hence, making a preferences these days are more confusing than it w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9405204461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89381745473 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.506189868 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148594867883 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550583702451 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493579281941 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951323797624 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394096571931 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...t these days’ people are available with a lots of options than in the past. This essay...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'options'' or 'option's'?
Suggestion: options'; option's
...s, recent advancement has increased the options availability to a great extent. Sub...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decade' or simply 'decades'?
Suggestion: a decade; decades
... the right product. For instance, about a decades ago, there was 2 or 3 mobile brands in ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...le brands in the market, but these days thousand mobile brands are introduced. Hence, ma...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a preference' or simply 'preferences'?
Suggestion: a preference; preferences
...le brands are introduced. Hence, making a preferences these days are more confusing than it w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9405204461 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89381745473 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.506189868 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148594867883 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550583702451 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493579281941 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951323797624 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394096571931 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.