Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The manufacturing is nowadays developing in manifold fields such as agriculture, industry, education, technology and so on. Therefore, the outbreak of products was born to adapt the selection necessary of human life. However, this issue also includes its own pros and cons.
In general, advantages of having many choices not only improve products quality but also help customers to choose suitably between the types of goods. Clearly, the increase in commodities leads to competition between the companies or the brands. Thus, the products quality is raised to get better day after day since the clients always demand for the excellent things. For example, most of the people choose to use iPhones or Samsung smartphones as they are frequently upgraded with the hi-tech gadgets compared to the others. That is the reason why the fashion industry is growing strongly all over the world with millions of diverse patterns.
Nonetheless, the choices overload also has disadvantages about the low quality products as well as confusion in purchasing decision. Obviously, the more merchandises are available in the market, the more difficulty it is to check their proper quality. Consequently, a bunch of fakes, low quality goods and even harmful products which pass over the inspection authorities reach into customers’ hands. In addition, products overload makes clients confused when they do not know which one is really suitable with them, they might eventually choose the wrong one. For instance, there are many universities with tons of different faculties which provoke the hesitation for students to choose the right place for studying.
Brief, a great deal of choices in recent day could bring us the good sides with many conveniences beside of the unexpected sides. However, if we carefully find out and make the right decisions, then we could take for ourselves the best and the most suitable things.
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... the best and the most suitable things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, nonetheless, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33223684211 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80292306058 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7821685419 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103957120501 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300548852655 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257669824642 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609130983233 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161040042594 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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