Some people believe that in order to reduce crimes, prisoners should be given longer prison sentences while some people think there are other alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It’s true that some people believe we should give severe punishments to offenders by prolonging the prison time. There could be several reasons why people think like this, but I agree with that we could promote other measures to improve offenders’ adaption.
There are various reasons why people insist the proposal of put these criminals into prison for longer time. It’s obviously the punishment of being sentenced is the most deterrent way to impose huge pressure when people tend to commit crimes. Comparing to other ways to make offenders pay the price for their behaviors, this serious consequence can absolutely enhance the status of country’s law and legislation. As a result, the rate of committing crimes can be under control and the societies can benefit from the mitigated criminal effects. For example, robberies and stealing, which are the mar threat for habitants, are expected to be seen less in a wide range of areas.
In my view, it’s important to give the people making mistakes a chance to correct and adjust themselves. Firstly, some of criminals do not mean to harm others deliberately, however, the misfortune might just happen due to a negative thought. In addition, if an offender was encouraged to provide service in some social activities as a volunteer, he would have regained confidence to live positively, by helping others. At the same time, with the growing sense of obligation and responsibility, those who committed comparative light crimes, are more likely to become productive members of our societies. Finally, governments should introduce social work projects to help them with psychotherapy and vocational training, to result in their better performance returning to society.
In conclusion, although imposing offenders to compensate their illegal behaviours in prison is a necessary way, I believe that we should not diss those means mentioned above as irrelevant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...mple, robberies and stealing, which are the mar threat for habitants, are expected to b...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the criminals') or simply say ''some criminals''.
Suggestion: some of the criminals; some criminals
...correct and adjust themselves. Firstly, some of criminals do not mean to harm others deliberately...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se means mentioned above as irrelevant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40594059406 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97169750629 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663366336634 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6604517627 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240400570583 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820705034748 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706520498197 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140326484587 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552510240485 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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