Some people believe that parents should teach their children to become good members of society. Others think that schools should do it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In the modern age, there are those who believe that children should be educated to be good individuals of the society by the school. I would strongly argue that the responsibility of training children belongs to their parents.
On the one hand, school provides a range of knowledge and helps the kids to develop their health and skills. however, since the number of students is countless, it is illogical for schools to have cautious training for them. As a result, the kids are more likely to progress in their own ways. Hence, it is difficult to ensure whether or not the children are developing positively or negatively. For instance, children are mostly affected by their fellows’ behaviors, and thus there are chances for them to develop their thoughts, in both bad and good ways.
On the other hand, parents are those who are bonded to their kids, so it is convinced that they have the right to raise their children. it is not exaggerated to say that parents can totally understand their kids and thanks to that, the approaches of mom or dad to the kids are likely to happen more fluently and naturally. it has proven that kids have strong liability to their family members, so they may feel comfortable being educated by their parents. To illustrate, many children’s mental issues are the result of their families’ well-being and the way their parents treat them.
To conclude, since now the people whom kids can totally receive education from effectively can not be precise. however, I personally think that parents can undoubtedly help their children to become good parts of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9557195572 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.646921882 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527675276753 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0653212507 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240361719348 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894542837019 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596026641031 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151011317883 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350602217951 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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