Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Post-high school education is widely believed to be free for everyone regardless of financial situation, which the government is totally in charge of. From my perspective, I certainly disagree with this statement for a variety of reasons, which will be discussed below.
It is undeniable that university is the most common way to get a better life for many people, but personally, I do not think it is the only way to achieve it. In fact, there are many other choices after high school graduation aside from university, such as vocational schools, trade schools, and technical schools. They provide a short-term training course for high school students, and then the new workers can join the job market afterwards without wasting four years or more on universities. Moreover, I believe that if people have a chance to do whatever they want to, they can be more creative in the field they choose. Actually, many successful people around the world are the ones who dropped out of college. For example, Kanye West attended both the American Academy of Art and Chicago State University, but he pursued his career in rap, music production, and fashion without a university degree.
It is worth noting that free universities and colleges are truly a great burden on the national economy. Firstly, it is clear that the government budget has been allocated for such areas as healthcare and public transportation. As a result, more unnecessary taxes would be laid on people over maintaining post-high school education if it was free. Furthermore, the more people with a post-university degree there are, the less chance there is for them to get a well-paid job. According to Statista, by 2020, the unemployed in Vietnam numbered over 2,2 million, of which university graduates made up three-quarters of the total.
In conclusion, I strongly claim that people have the right to choose any school they want to, not just a university. In addition, they should pay the tuition fee themselves, in order to manage their own future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02985074627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88586479902 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614925373134 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.325410657 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177136541055 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574316653025 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406140555215 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108320896386 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181197871007 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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