Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many are of the opinion that professionals like doctors and engineers are advised to work and devote themselves to their nation. Meanwhile, others hold that they should choose another country to work in if they wish. This essay will discuss the logic behind both viewpoints and present why I am more inclined towards the latter.
On the one hand, people who think that being educated and working in the same country make them responsible and confident. This means that students have a comprehension of national conditions, such as environment,
geographical location, and residents' beliefs. Therefore, they can support and treat diseases better than foreigners. They not only make a social
contribution but also provide economic power. Besides, each country gives a distinct education based on its system, which is essential for qualification at the university. Consequently, they are able to develop skills or broaden their horizons to repair machines or cure patients in the area where they did training. For example, in Vietnam, students get familiar with professionals' lives in a university by doing an internship that lasts one year
On the other hand, it is understandable why others argue that they need to study abroad or work for a company in another nation. One of the most compelling reasons is that they grab a chance to raise their awareness of the sphere to have a greater career in the future. In other words, they gain a deeper insight into researching to work as a high-skill individual to get a high salary. Hence they learn other sides of knowledge, which are developed by professionals and cannot be found in their own country. For instance, they make friends coming from many cultural traditions in order to discover the world to be a global citizen and have a better quality of life. Moreover, living in a multicultural region, people will be easy to adapt and ready to travel around the globe because of their experience. In particular, socialists can go to a new area to learn more, and after that, they decide to come back to their homes to inspire the next generation.
In confusion, while there are some benefits of working in the country where they did their training, I still agree with those who think that they need to be advised to travel overseas to work or study if they want.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'train'
Suggestion: train
...ure patients in the area where they did training. For example, in Vietnam, students get ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...-skill individual to get a high salary. Hence they learn other sides of knowledge, wh...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9462915601 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77138740884 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567774936061 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4551758371 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.764705882 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2941176471 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446529737913 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132831822792 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103834780518 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222510789769 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977446588532 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'train'
Suggestion: train
...ure patients in the area where they did training. For example, in Vietnam, students get ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 389, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...-skill individual to get a high salary. Hence they learn other sides of knowledge, wh...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in particular, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9462915601 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77138740884 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567774936061 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4551758371 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.764705882 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2941176471 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446529737913 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132831822792 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103834780518 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222510789769 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977446588532 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.