Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Life has been always seen as to earn success by every person. Some people argued that the success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that it is based on other factors like money and personal appearance. I agree with the first statement because success is not measured by the material things, and in this some factors also added with it which I discuss above.
In one hand, money is considered to have a wealth which can increase your standard of living and it seems that you are rich enough to spent and buy anything. Another is appearance when you wear expensive clothes, jewelry and accessories, contribute to make you look higher in society and popular. But both these aspects are not be fit for the present richest people. For example, Mukesh Ambani India richest man, who is very simple and not looking for any style statement and not also get a makeover to look successful, which doesn't mean that they are not. He chose to being who they are.
On the other hand, hard work and dedication for work is the key to reach the goal, but there are other potential needs to be taken to get success. To illustrate, you need to be humble, honest, genuine, cooperative, responsible, smart, intelligent, trustworthy, teamworker, motivated, skilled and always committed to learn everyday from your mistakes and from the peers, so it comes of as a stepping stone in your life to make every one step of your success. However, everyone has their own perspective and thinking but it should be kept in mind that successful doesn't mean earning all external benefits but fulfilling internal satisfactions and needs.
In conclusion, I support that the hard work and determination is the best traits anyone have, but moreover other characteristics required to become successful which clearly states your respect and abilities among nation and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
Life has been always seen as to earn success by every person...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...et a makeover to look successful, which doesnt mean that they are not. He chose to bei...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
..., skilled and always committed to learn everyday from your mistakes and from the peers, ...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... should be kept in mind that successful doesnt mean earning all external benefits but ...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...determination is the best traits anyone have, but moreover other characteristics req...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94620253165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68159373521 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5384914329 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329647539726 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114425569721 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168571151938 0.0667982634062 252% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197287373753 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161617124135 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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