Some people believe that the university main aim is to help graduates for a better jobs. While others believe that university education bring benefits for individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Nowadays, the university is the further education to continue the academic of society. Several people say that to get a good job should be graduate from university, while the others said that many advantages of university education as personally and community.
On the one hand, the people who next run in further academic particularly in university is the best choice where they will learn a special subject then learn it deeply. The major purpose of this happen, one of them is to getting a great work. For example, the people who work in the best places such as, department of government, the best IT on policy, and the others, are graduated in the best university with the best output also. As a result, it is depend on the situation, when they have a good value as well as from achieve university will considered by the employers. In conclusion, to reach a better occupation, needed a best result therefore can become a consideration in every opportunities.
On the other hand, in university is part of way to form character of people, because they have a tendency to convert to be an adult. Consequently, their way to thinking and determine anything is improve because many influence which is given by the environment of university. The first, the habitual that is showing of it, would be present a good change of characteristic in order to can decide a choice, increase a discipline. Secondly, the other positive effects of this matter are transform the people becoming helpful among the society, in contrast coach them to be independently as if can finishing any problems by themselves.
To sum up, in my point of view, the paramount of university is processing to be adult then learning and adaptation in the positive neighborhood. That is why I am not agree with the both statement because the major purpose of university is a study container.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...he best university with the best output also. As a result, it is depend on the situa...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...he best output also. As a result, it is depend on the situation, when they have a good...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...as well as from achieve university will considered by the employers. In conclusion, to rea...
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Line 3, column 627, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...n, to reach a better occupation, needed a best result therefore can become a cons...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...y to thinking and determine anything is improve because many influence which is given b...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun influence seems to be countable; consider using: 'many influences'.
Suggestion: many influences
...d determine anything is improve because many influence which is given by the environment of un...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...tive neighborhood. That is why I am not agree with the both statement because the maj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87697160883 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97984552385 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9541127669 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3076923077 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197213889061 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662099432955 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514260022613 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124835163417 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520321482709 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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