Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Free social service should be a compulsory part of high school education or not is a hot topic for debate. However, many people think unpaid community is an option for teenager in high school, I convinced that it must be a compulsory part.
The first and the most important reason is social services improve many necessary skills. some activities like working for a charity make student become good at teamwork and special ability that even they don’t know like how to organize a charity music show or how to prepare a dinner for old people, patient in the hospital with their classmate. Moreover, teenager can discover themselves and try to creative something that they have never imagined before. it will be useful for them in their career later.
In addition, we can force student raise the social awareness. Nowadays, it is seemed like teenager pay attention and spend time to some attractive thing like gossip on Facebook, post photos on Instagram, or play some useless games. unpaid working for our social remind them what they have, what they need to do and how they do their quest. improving the neighbourhood or clean the trash to protect the environment make young boys and girls realize they what to do to maintain our life environment.
Last but not lead, community service can help children become more and more mature. Instead of think how to have beautiful selfie photos or how to pass a stage in some game, teenager will think about their future, not only for themselves but also for the country where they live and the next generation. they will understand how hard the life is that become the motivation for them to have a sympathy for everything their parents provide for them.
To sum up, unpaid community services is necessary for student in high school due to many advantages and in my front of view it must be a compulsory part for every teenager to graduate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82515337423 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49087498746 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8541886371 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304018065753 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113712285693 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905294934914 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201508469686 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904055091687 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.