Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Tourism plays a major role in the economic development of the countries. A great majority of the people around the world travel to foreign countries for several reasons, such as trips or holidays. While some people argue that it is tourists' duty to adapt to the customs and traditions of the country they are visiting, others claim that every country's population has to welcome cultural differences.
First of all, locals should understand that for most visitors everything is new, namely the time zone, the surroundings and possibly the language. Moreover, many tourists, when visiting a foreign country for the very first time, find it difficult to acclimate to the weather conditions. Locals ought to warmly introduce the tourists to their culture and way of living. However, if the visitors are not interesting in anything but sightseeing, locals should should not criticize them for that as long as they do not offend anyone. In case the locals welcome cultural differences, they can learn many things from the visitors as well. For instance, visitors can present the locals their own country, teach them words coming from their mother tongue or prepare them a traditional recipe.
On the other hand, every visitor, before travelling to a foreign country, could inquire on the country's history and culture. He or she could also learn some common idioms and words of the national language spoken in the country they plan to visit. Locals might deem this as a sign of respect for them and their country's culture. Visiting a foreign country is a great opportunity for anyone, because they embrace a new culture. Visitors should take advantage of that and try the traditional cuisine, dances, musics and sports of the country.
To conclude, I strongly believe that open-mindedness is needed from both visitors and locals. Each part has to behave respectfully and peacefully and consequently not to judge the religion, the race or the nationality. I think that interaction between locals and foreigners is a great experience, in other words it is a cultural interchange, which is certainly bound to broaden their horizons.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248062015504 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.131782945736 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0801033591731 0.0946595960268 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490956072351 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0542635658915 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100775193798 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0232558139535 0.0403226058552 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76132126871 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0361757105943 0.0326793684256 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.121447028424 0.0861772015684 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0258397932817 0.021408717616 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00516795865633 0.011925033212 43% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2130.0 1933.35771543 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13832853026 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394812680115 0.374742101984 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302593659942 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21325648415 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118155619597 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76132126871 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.037074148 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 57.7434809248 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4117647059 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3896862305 49.517814964 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.294117647 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.6711307001 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.58241758242 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353827373446 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108177483699 0.102741220458 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0540690032273 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.536488809661 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0949378283626 0.148594505496 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141378326713 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776284918421 0.0742795772207 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.401916330165 0.324371583561 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.070683175326 0.0638462369009 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256935022505 0.228012699653 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020772725983 0.058150111329 36% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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