Some people believe that young people should spend more time at home and less time outside the home, others disagree, discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whether the youngsters should spend most of their time at home or outside the house has been a cause of concern to patents. Some child's advocates are against the ides of juvenile spending a lot of time at home, while others are supporting this view that young children should spend more of their time at home. I agree with the later opinion, as this essay will discuss good behavior as one of the benefits children form when they spend most time at home.
On the one hand, adolescents often time desire to be free from parental guidance in terms of what they do outside home. Many engaged with peers in social vices, which in turns have affected their moral behaviours. To illustrate, my cousin Daniel, a 12year old boy, prefers hanging out with friends whenever his parents are not around. This has made him to develop carefree attitude towards his studies. Consequently, it has affected his performance in school. Had it been Daniel spend most of his time at home studying even when the parents are away, he would have come out with good grades at school .
On the other hand, when a growing child spends most of his time at home, he is most likely to be well mannered because he will be taught on having good behavior and not only that but also learn to follow rules. This will propel the child to being a better person in future. For instance, I was taught by my parents during my early life to always be in the house. Initially it was boring, because i wanted to play with friends. I later learned how to cook and assist my mother with house chores. Today even as an adult, cooking is one of my hobbies. This has made me a better person, in that i do help my wife with domestic works, whenever she is occupied with official duties.
In conclusion, although few people are against the idea of teenagers spending their time at home, many persons including myself have benefitted from being made as a child to spend more time in the home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52124645892 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25761184909 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532577903683 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7635238352 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8823529412 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307420417325 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928568188733 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128357708119 0.0667982634062 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22783067341 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149163103375 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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