Some people choose to have their first child at an older age. What are the reasons? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
There has been a growing number of people who decide to deliver a child at later stages of life. The underlying reasons for this trend are various and I believe that the merits are surpassed by the downsides.
There are two main factors leading to the decision of delaying parenthood. To begin with, in an immensely developing world with such a hectic pace of life, more and more individuals, especially the young generation, have the propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles. This is because having a stable career before getting married and giving birth lays a sound foundation for the married life of each individual and the insurance of providing their offspring with sufficient living conditions. Additionally, women empowerment and feminism movement have altered a woman’s sole responsibility looking after the children. As a matter of fact, unlike what woman’s role was defined in the past, there is a growing number of women stamping their mark on a variety of fields, which therefore, give women rights to decide how, when and whom they want to give birth to.
However, the drawbacks should not be overlooked. Initially, the possibility of successfully having their own biological offspring is noticeably low because of the known growing risks of getting pregnant after the age of 35 years. For instance, a research published in the WHO pointed out that for women in the mid-thirty or later , there is 18% to 25% of pregnancies end in miscarriage, proving that the risk of loosing pregnancy is in direct proportion to a woman’s age. Furthermore, the problem of widening the generation gap should be considered thoroughly when making the decision of giving birth at an older age. This is because the major difference in distance and awareness of two generations is proved to negatively affect family relationships, indicated in difficulties in bridging the generation gap and resolving conflicts in different points of views.
In the light of the above facts, the occupational prioritization and women empowerment in society could be seen as the root of birth postponement and I still believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, for instance, in fact, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23011363636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03385546535 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3822444261 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.615384615 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16726010388 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508145729887 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410253375559 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913965951145 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208462180035 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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