Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Humans as a species have come a long way from their humble beginnings. To say that right now we are at the pinnacle of advancement wouldn’t be an exaggeration. We have achieved a lot, from antibiotics to prosthetics that enables people to live their finest lives. But everything isn’t perfect. This story of unimaginable advancements and glory has its dark side. Now that humans are living longer than ever and world’s population is at an all-time high, we are producing waste at an unprecedented levels.
The waste ranges from the plastic packaging to the left-over food. This waste, when not recycled properly, causes horrendous impact on the environment. Many a countries are suffering from this menace already. There’s an unthinkable amount of plastic in our water bodies and chemicals in our water bodies. In India the once holy river of Ganges is now littered with plastic bottles, bags and harmful chemicals. The oceans are suffering too as is evident by the travelogue of a man who sailed from California to Hawaii. In his 30 days journey the sailor saw stray plastic products in the wide open ocean almost every day.
There have been many propositions put forward by the scientists on how to curb this problem. The most reasonable and practical one is recycling. To achieve this we need public education on a massive scale. Second thing we need is the enforcement of the law. The government should take more action to punish those responsible for polluting our mother earth. At the same time people and companies who try to recycle should be rewarded. It should be the prime responsibility of the government to promote a positive environment for the reduction of waste and improved recycling for the betterment of our future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'level'?
Suggestion: level
...are producing waste at an unprecedented levels. The waste ranges from the plastic pa...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a country' or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: a country; countries
...rendous impact on the environment. Many a countries are suffering from this menace already....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03071672355 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92453432599 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1547430405 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.65 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16712697918 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432957530493 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435998599291 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102029892637 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437195499127 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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