Some people consider art to be essential and others think it is not. Which view do you agree with and why?
Art, a mesmerizing facet of this society has gone along with history since the dawn of civilization. As the world is constantly changing and advancing, many people have started to doubt the essence of art. Stances are indicating that this expression of human imagination is an indispensable part of humanity, whereas others believe that art is no longer essential for people's life. Notwithstanding the prospective loss of interest in art, I am in the favor of the idea that art is of paramount importance for society.
To begin with, art is a creative medium for cultivating one's thoughts and imagination. It is undeniable that by looking at 'the Mona Lisa', people may spark within themselves a possible urge to find out what is behind the smile of the girl depicted in the masterpiece of Leonardo Da Vinci's. By striving to figure out the meaning of art pieces, people may also be likely to develop their creativity as well as be able to meet like-minded people. Through sharing distinctive thoughts and different perspectives about art with others, not only will art continue to be embraced but also the relationships between acquaintances might as well be bolstered and developed.
Another reason worth mentioning is that art is the reflection of one's emotions and one's world of thoughts. Courtesy of creating powerful strokes on a blank canvas or taking pictures of enigmatic eyes, artists could deliver their messages through their masterpieces. To exemplify this, it is prevailing to see children drawing pictures to raise people's awareness about serious problems like global warming or animal extinction. Had this world been devoid of art, humans would not have such a powerful method of describing one's feelings and emotions.
In conclusion, although art is losing its place in this constant-developing society, it is still an irreplaceable part of human life. By shedding light on the reasons that art is beneficial for one's imagination as well as for people's relationships, it is crystal clear that art would remain indispensable in this world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, still, well, whereas, as for, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16119402985 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07674177371 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588059701493 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9207069382 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192714350777 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693899422469 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411825199355 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118313047579 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550192901165 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.