Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that the legitimate age for marriage is 21 and above. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because of the rationale following.
First of all, It is clear that people at 21 and over are recognized as mature. To explain, they are able to control their behaviour and have specific thinking in one issue. In other words, they can distinguish right from wrong, so making rational decisions about life will be more significant. Moreover, because it is possible for this age to apply for a full-time job with a stable income, people from 21 and above can themselves achieve financial freedom to take care of their family, such as providing basic necessities like food and drinks or education for their children and paying bills.
Additionally, when people get married before turning into 21, there are lots of problems that may happen with their life. For one thing, they could not have the experience that they should do during their youth. For example, children and adolescents need time to not only study but also have fun with their friends, which can help them widen their knowledge as well as enhance their communicative skills or cognitive development. If teenagers or children marry too soon, they must spend all of their time on taking care of their kids and dealing with chores; hence, they are likely to be depressed due to reaching adulthood hastily. The other reason is that youngsters might suffer from detrimental effects in terms of physical health. Take uterine rupture as an example. Scientific research has shown that if young people give birth at an early stage, it is unsafe for not only the mother because she can lose too much blood while doing so, but also the infant as he would die.
In conclusion, people should enter into marriage when they are at least 21 and above, for they are capable of having self-control, looking after themselves and avoiding potential risks happening with their well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all, for one thing, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95136778116 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53681970544 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6375916089 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194264405971 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695403374711 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058878539244 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127364004418 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268159372176 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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