The use of social media, such as Facebook and Instagram is replacing face-to-face contact in this century.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, with the explosive growth of technology, social networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram are beginning to take over person to person interaction. Personally, I totally follow the idea that this trend will provide human with more pros than cons.
On the one hand, keeping in touch with others through social networks is convenient. To illustrate, because the Internet is becoming more common now, people can easily access it anywhere and anytime with a smartphone. Therefore, social media apps are able to help them interact with their friends easier by texting, calling or even seeing each other’s faces on the screen. As a result, these type of apps make communication more comfortable and time-saving. Moreover, this is an effective solution for long-distance communication. For example, instead of the traditional way like writing letters and sending telegrams in the past, using social media can help everyone receive and send messages immediately, so they can save time and exchange more information with their relatives, especially parents who want to talk with their children living or working abroad.
However, this is not always the best way to replace face to face contact due to the importance of human interaction. For instance, in some settings such as business, real life conversation is essential since businessmen need to discuss directly with counterparts to reach the final decision on their contract. Another situation is that when individuals really miss their loved ones, texting or talking through a screen seems not be lively enough as it would be better with physical contact including hugging and kissing one another.
To sum up, social media platform will definitely bring back numerous benefits, but in some cases, it cannot replace entirely the conventional communication method.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use the Internet is becoming more common now, people can easily access it anywher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41114982578 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83722983417 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668989547038 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.1404840303 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181340343114 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642275690185 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685881561834 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104452080491 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208737845293 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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