Some people find that following a strict routine allows them to feel more in control. Others, however, think that constant changes to the routine make life more interesting and less predictable. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that having a scheduled and well-planned day makes them feel in control. Others argue that having a flexible routine, which is prone to changes, is what makes life more exciting and fills it with unexpected events. However, in my opinion, a good balance between planning and flexibility should be reached.
From one hand, a strict routine, which is possible through planning in advance and one's good discipline, allows to complete all the desired activities and tasks that were included into the routine. As a consequence, people can create life roadmaps and reach their goals via careful planning by following their routine. Such scenario puts an individual, who creates and follows the routine, in control, making him or her feel that way through accomplishing scheduled tasks. However, there are too many variables in life that are not always possible to incorporate into a plan. By breaking the routine, these moments can cause the individual feel lost and depressed.
From another hand, by relaxing the daily routine, some people welcome changes. As they report, such lifestyle enables an interesting and unpredictable life. By being open to changes, they often experience a lack of planning and feel difficulties to achieve their goals, since they get easily disrupted by the unseen circumstances. The survey, conducted by the Daily News, describes that people without an everyday schedule are less successful in their work.
In my opinion, a good balance should be there. Being able to create and follow a strict routine, which is flexible enough to address possible changes by retransforming the routine structure, is the best way to feel both in control and have an interesting life.
To conclude, both views have their own advantages and disadvantages. That is why it is necessary to come up with the hybrid approach that enables balance in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
...dvance and ones good discipline, allows to complete all the desired activities and tasks th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21381578947 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77781007118 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3404099437 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239439083723 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745743042357 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592517309056 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131836514896 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523329343647 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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