Some people find that following a strict routine allows them to feel more in control. Others, however, think that constant changes to the routine make life more interesting and less predictable. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that having a scheduled and well-planned day makes them feel in control. Others argue that having a flexible routine, which is prone to changes, is what makes life more exciting and fills it with unexpected events. However, in my opinion, a good balance between planning and flexibility should be reached.
From one hand, a strict routine, which is possible through planning in advance and one's good discipline, allows to complete all the desired activities and tasks that were included into the routine. As a consequence, people can create life roadmaps and reach their goals via careful planning by following their routine. Such scenario puts an individual, who creates and follows the routine, in control, making him or her feel that way through accomplishing scheduled tasks. However, there are too many variables in life that are not always possible to incorporate into a plan. By breaking the routine, these moments can cause the individual feel lost and depressed.
From another hand, by relaxing the daily routine, some people welcome changes. As they report, such lifestyle enables an interesting and unpredictable life. By being open to changes, they often experience a lack of planning and feel difficulties to achieve their goals, since they get easily disrupted by the unseen circumstances. The survey, conducted by the Daily News, describes that people without an everyday schedule are less successful in their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'completing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: completing
...dvance and ones good discipline, allows to complete all the desired activities and tasks th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1222.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29004329004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74050250937 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7082182319 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.833333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180953540966 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680335541571 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516870260447 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124842932227 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497634190903 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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