Nowadays, some people tend to apply for nonpermanent jobs for certain months in a year instead of long-term jobs and spend the rest of the time on their interests. I totally agree with this statement because temporary jobs allow people to earn a little money in a short of time and individuals can get a diverse experience in various fields.
To begin with, nonpermanent jobs provide individuals, who are in need, financially in a period of time. To be more specific, some startups need a small amount of money in a short time for their projects and business. For example, WhatsApp CEO had been working for Facebook as a temporary employee in 3 months because of financial problems before started his company, which turned out to be successful later. As a result, short-term works offer opportunities to make some money in a short of time.
Furthermore, temporary jobs offer opportunities to gain work experience in various areas. In more detail, short-term jobs allow individuals to get a better understanding of different businesses, job functions and career paths. For instance, by working for many businesses and different jobs, individuals can understand more about others fields and acquire knowledge of various areas. Therefore, people can easily start a business without being deceived. As a consequence, nonpermanent jobs are the best way to gain knowledge of numerous fields and acquire relevant work experience.
In conclusion, this essay affirms that temporary jobs bring many many benefits to individuals. Short-term works may not only support people financially in a short period of time but also provide opportunities to achieve work experience in different fields.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28252788104 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03068154223 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2588895711 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189723890215 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753383057182 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399411655573 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131827837432 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034609438342 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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