Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climates. Discuss both views and explain which climate you prefer.
People have different views about the places live in. While some think living hot climates is better, I prefer living in areas with cold weather.
There are, admittedly, several advantages to living in the hot climates. Firstly, it gives the chance to show people’s personality and beauty since they can wear beautiful and gorgeous clothes in the high temperature instead of the heavy and thick winter coats. As a result, people may feel more confident and happy especially those who have slim and attracting bodies. For example, my sister like to wear fabulous fashions and she said the summer can let others know how beautiful she is. On the other hand, it benefits for the old people because they need the warm living conditions to reduce the risks of illness. Many evidences can be seen that the old move to the warmer areas, and as an example, my grandparent did that ten years ago.
However, others prefer living in the cold countries, as those places can give them a clean and quiet place to live in since there are fewer people and less cars on the streets. It would become a calm city if the weather has turned to cold and the pace of working and competition would become slow there as well. Besides the merits of cold climates mentioned above, money can also be saved in cold climates since the temperature is too low to open a store all day, which would only open few hours a day, reducing the consumptions of shopping. For instance, the expenditure for living in Singapore is much higher than living in Russia. Obviously, the people who live in Russia spend their time most in staying home as opposed to those live in Singapore would spend much money in shopping.
In conclusion, many advantages can be found for living in both type climates, for my part, I prefer living in a place with cold weather because I do not have slim body yet I need a place to study and read.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun cars is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ive in since there are fewer people and less cars on the streets. It would become a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61127596439 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39887809954 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9107877587 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26638964699 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959720695026 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843596547651 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188655207045 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787404571285 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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