Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is true that although the criminals have been sentenced, they would re-crime after releasing. There are several reasons for that phenomenon and a lot of solutions can be taken to solve this problem.
When it comes to the reasons for that, several aspects can be considered. Firstly, some newly released prisoners have urgency to get money, requiring a large amount of money immediately, such as the illness, but they do not have any saving in the bank which makes the step back to be a robber or thief. Secondly, the financial crimes often lack skills such as accounting skill, computer skill, so it is hard for them to get employed and earn their own living without any training. Finally, for some criminal offenders who were sentenced for financial issues regard breaking-law behaviours as their job, so they are lured by the profits earned illegally.
In terms of solving this problem, some measures are come up with. The government should give the people who do not have certain skill a chance to receive short term training in order to learn skills. By that, they can find some simple jobs, such as taxi drivers or shop keepers, which can afford their daily uses. One the other hand, the high intelligent criminals should be observed more strictly although they have been released. If necessary, the laws even should be update according to their abnormal behaviours.
In conclusion, re-offending is caused by many reasons, and this bad issue can be tackled by a variety of measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'updated'?
Suggestion: updated
.... If necessary, the laws even should be update according to their abnormal behaviours....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55411215188 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.765707686 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.583333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358456954588 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125586378425 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086378654995 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231895840313 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844669167987 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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